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Kurt Busiek  
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 More options Jul 4, 11:31 pm
Newsgroups: rec.arts.sf.written
From: Kurt Busiek <k...@busiek.comics>
Date: Fri, 4 Jul 2008 11:31:40 -0700
Local: Fri, Jul 4 2008 11:31 pm
Subject: Re: Common First Author Mistakes - What are they, and are there SF speficic ones?
On 2008-07-04 11:18:37 -0700, Konrad Gaertner <kgaert...@tx.rr.com> said:

> phdu...@gmail.com wrote:

>> And I was wondering, what are these problems?  The only one I can
>> think of is the 'kitchen sink' problem, where every cool idea the
>> author's ever had shows up in one book, but I'm sure there's more.
>> Are there any sfnal specific first novel problems?

> Telling instead of showing, railroad plots, idiot plots, sloppy
> scene changes, inconsistant internal chronology.

What is a "railroad plot"?  I'm unfamiliar with the term.

kdb


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